tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post4137914705955456138..comments2023-06-16T07:52:59.351-07:00Comments on Journey in Writing: Second Campaigner Challenge!!!RaeAnnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-57363152924239768322012-03-15T16:14:52.794-07:002012-03-15T16:14:52.794-07:00Yeah, me too. Coming...;)heheYeah, me too. Coming...;)heheRaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-34871143007709577722012-03-15T06:36:31.603-07:002012-03-15T06:36:31.603-07:00i love stories like this. now where's the preq...i love stories like this. now where's the prequel? ;)Goraddehttp://goradde.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-62199414925762865932012-03-12T22:51:07.844-07:002012-03-12T22:51:07.844-07:00Thanks! And you're not the only one...Thanks! And you're not the only one...RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-45678537063892160212012-03-12T22:50:42.103-07:002012-03-12T22:50:42.103-07:00Thanks! =)Thanks! =)RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-3262663449796347322012-03-12T22:50:24.025-07:002012-03-12T22:50:24.025-07:00Thanks. Will keep in mind your words.Thanks. Will keep in mind your words.RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-52165420948371017842012-03-12T21:14:00.823-07:002012-03-12T21:14:00.823-07:00Really enjoyed this, the final twist and the bride...Really enjoyed this, the final twist and the bride's words said so much, wonder what he did to meet this end? Very well written.Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-81465018676246262732012-03-12T13:54:16.988-07:002012-03-12T13:54:16.988-07:00I liked this. I want to know what he did to deserv...I liked this. I want to know what he did to deserve it. Nicely done.Jessica Salyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00227752359369023249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-66101364702734313862012-03-12T08:11:02.556-07:002012-03-12T08:11:02.556-07:00Nice succinctness to the prose and getting from on...Nice succinctness to the prose and getting from one point to the other but building on the emotion that resurfaces in the end,.Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823739886038280225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-6994141944823892562012-03-12T00:32:41.286-07:002012-03-12T00:32:41.286-07:00Haha! Thanks! You're the first one to agree......Haha! Thanks! You're the first one to agree...RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-5281285935695106702012-03-12T00:31:49.442-07:002012-03-12T00:31:49.442-07:00Thanks! I enjoyed yours too...Thanks! I enjoyed yours too...RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-26029458542695390122012-03-11T23:38:27.601-07:002012-03-11T23:38:27.601-07:00I liked the pictures and the atmosphere you create...I liked the pictures and the atmosphere you created in my head. The twist was mean, but I somehow got the feeling that the groom deserved his end.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06112359944059755033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-13478028055663008412012-03-11T22:10:19.006-07:002012-03-11T22:10:19.006-07:00That was definitely the most interesting flash fic...That was definitely the most interesting flash fic I've read for this challenge.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-19419218496805901862012-03-11T19:07:48.117-07:002012-03-11T19:07:48.117-07:00Thanks!Ummm...I don't think I wrote a poem for...Thanks!Ummm...I don't think I wrote a poem for this challenge...;P But, I'm so happy!!! To get a thumbs up from an awesome writer like you!RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-69063205642229615402012-03-11T19:06:31.753-07:002012-03-11T19:06:31.753-07:00Haha! Thanks! =)Haha! Thanks! =)RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-61843097905983198852012-03-11T16:45:46.546-07:002012-03-11T16:45:46.546-07:00Wow. Usually I can side with one or another charac...Wow. Usually I can side with one or another character in these flash fiction entries, but in this case I have no idea. I love your story and poem for that reason! Great writing, too. :)Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-55389508229328000282012-03-11T13:20:43.476-07:002012-03-11T13:20:43.476-07:00I made sure to have someone watch our getaway car ...I made sure to have someone watch our getaway car on our wedding day. Not a fan of rice, popcorn, or explosions tucked away in there. Nice one! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-66823896684390557822012-03-10T22:57:48.832-08:002012-03-10T22:57:48.832-08:00Thanks! Love yours too!Thanks! Love yours too!RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-64782711416991503222012-03-10T22:04:22.136-08:002012-03-10T22:04:22.136-08:00Oh! What a witch! That was a great twist! Enjoyed ...Oh! What a witch! That was a great twist! Enjoyed it immensely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-73539982404939901772012-03-10T18:03:58.770-08:002012-03-10T18:03:58.770-08:00Oh and thanks!!! =DDDOh and thanks!!! =DDDRaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-22762667830167224422012-03-10T18:03:37.160-08:002012-03-10T18:03:37.160-08:00Really? I thought your twist is a shocking one!!! ...Really? I thought your twist is a shocking one!!! Couldn't wait to read yours!RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-64942819521803574452012-03-10T18:02:40.687-08:002012-03-10T18:02:40.687-08:00Oh, thanks! You're right! I'm a disaster a...Oh, thanks! You're right! I'm a disaster around grammar! Thanks for pointing them out! Will correct them as soon as I can! Glad that you enjoyed the story...I think it's the final prompt that I used...it didn't made sense, right?! Oh dear...RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-84980479816275868432012-03-10T01:33:02.503-08:002012-03-10T01:33:02.503-08:00Whoa! I think you topped my twist on the first cha...Whoa! I think you topped my twist on the first chalenge. LOL Nice entry. ; )<br />Melissa Maygrove #14Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-22917867092924159702012-03-09T23:29:34.235-08:002012-03-09T23:29:34.235-08:00That was shocking. I thought he was possessive and...That was shocking. I thought he was possessive and would be the one to do harm to her. I could not figure out what prompt/s you used. <br /><br /><br />Two grammar suggestions:<br />"...I watched her glided down the aisle." - should be glide down the aisle.<br />"I smelt burning flash." - I think you meant smelled burning flesh.<br /><br />I enjoyed the story!<br />Richard AlanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-28748199783905078402012-03-09T22:44:04.004-08:002012-03-09T22:44:04.004-08:00Hhmmm...agreed. And thanks for stopping by! Oh, an...Hhmmm...agreed. And thanks for stopping by! Oh, and love yours!RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7290059670536997353.post-37196177725810543052012-03-09T22:38:50.070-08:002012-03-09T22:38:50.070-08:00Thanks! Yup...it was unexpected for me too...Thanks! Yup...it was unexpected for me too...RaeAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05104497191718471812noreply@blogger.com